A short teaser of an excerpt from Intangible.
“Luke,” Sera said, reaching out to touch his arm. The healing energy flowed freely out of her hand and into him. His arm glowed slightly. “Talk to me. Tell me what you Saw.”
Silence.
An odd dizzy feeling started at the top of her head and trickled down her spine. She had a horrible thought about what was making her twin brother so petrified. About what would make her feel the same way.
Her voice was a whisper. “Do I get hurt?”
His face contorted, but he didn’t say anything.
“Oh my god. Do I die?”
He closed his eyes.
“Oh.” The air rushed out of her lungs on that one word. She was going to die.
Luke’s voice was tight, tortured when he said, “Let’s go.” He bent down to pick up Sera’s bag again, then headed for the front door. Sera grabbed her book bag and his, took a look around the dark house one last time.
She stepped out onto the front porch where Luke waited, and locked the door behind her. Luke started down the stairs, but her voice stopped him.
“Luke?”
He turned to look at her. She was going to die. She knew she was going to die. But she couldn’t stop herself from asking the question she already knew the answer to.
“Have you ever had a vision that didn’t come true?” she said. “Ever?”
This is likely to be the cover copy and/or blurb. Does it make you want to pick up the book and read it?
Yes I would absolutely buy this on my nook based on this teaser!
Great! Thanks for the feedback.
sounds great! What a teaser
Thanks, Angie!
Powerful. More, please! Passing this on to friends.
Thank you, Kanesha! I appreciate it!
Meghan suggests starting at "Her voice was a whisper." but she loves it and can't wait to read it!
Meghan's friends Jan and Sophie vote for starting with "an odd dizzy feeling."
Thanks! That's very helpful.
yes!